Feedback on my Double Page Spread from Peers

Jodie-

• The page is quite empty.
• It's not very unique.

Kate- 

• It has a good layout.
• The picture is good and goes well with the page.
• Is very conventional.
• The large letter 'L' may need making less bright.

Hollie-

• The costume on the model goes well with the genre.
• The overall look of the page fits well with the theme and genre.
• The large 'L' looks good.
• The columns look good and make it easy to read.