Second Front Cover Draft

My Response to Feedback on my Front Cover

Now that I have obtained feedback on my front cover I know how I can improve it to make it look more like a magazine of the Indie Rock genre and make it appear more professional.

To improve I will:

• Change the colour scheme so that it works better with the Indie Rock genre
• Change the font used on the masthead
• Add more features
• Make the features smaller
• Change the headline font or colour
• Change the headline 
• Change the tagline
• Make the tagline bigger
• Make the barcode smaller
• Make the plug smaller
• Improve the quality of the photo/change the photo

Feedback on my Front Cover from Peers

Jodie-

• The colour scheme is bad but I realize that it works well with the outfit the model is wearing.
• There is a lack of features.
• I like the border used.
• It's hard to read the headline font however the font does looks good.

Kate-

• The picture is nice and has good lighting.
• The layout is good.
• A good range of fonts used.
• The bar-code is too long.
• The tagline isn't very effective. 

Hollie-

• The colour scheme is good.
• The masthead doesn't stand out enough.
• The footer looks good.
• The white text blends with the white background.
• The tagline is too small.

Mini Evaluation of my Front Cover First Draft

My front cover first draft has helped me to decide what looks effective and what could possibly be improved in relation to the layout, font and colour scheme etc. I like the layout of the cover and how the text falls around the model ensuring the main features of the model are not covered. I also like how the models head covers part of the masthead to give the impression that the magazine is well established and professional. In addition to this I think that the positioning of the 'plug' is very effective as it fills a large space, making the magazine appear less empty. This is similar to the barcode, date, issue number and price which also fill spaces giving the magazine a full and exciting look. I have used 3 main fonts on my front cover which are 'Ariel narrow', 'Impact' and 'Brush Script std'. I like the use of the Ariel narrow font on the masthead because it’s simple and easy to read which is essential for the masthead, however it’s not very memorable and so this may be something that I edit when I create my second draft. I do however think that the use of the font 'Impact' throughout the cover is very effective as it is bold and stands out so attracts readers. It is also easy to read, which is another plus because it needs to be readable so they know what is featured in the magazine. I also think that the use of the 'Brush script std' is effective as gives the cover variation and looks almost handwritten giving it a personal touch. I used the colour scheme red, blue, grey and white on the cover. I like this colour scheme however I believe that the use of the blue is too overpowering and doesn't reflect the Indie Rock genre the way I had hoped, so on my second draft I may tone down the blue so I only use it in little places such as the plug and small headings. This consequently means I will have to change the border colour to something darker such as grey. Overall I believe that this is a good first draft which although may need some improvements, achieves the look I'm hoping to achieve on my final front cover.

First Front Cover Draft

Front Cover Making Process

This is a step by step process of how I made my front cover, with print screens and comments to show exactly how it was done.

Experimenting with my Favourite Images for my Magazine Front Cover

These are my 3 favourite images that I am considering using on my magazine front cover:

 Out of all the photo's I took for my front cover I chose these 3 as my favourite images because from looking at existing front covers I have decided that these are the most conventional images. I also think that these photo's portray the message that I am trying to achieve the best. I am going to experiment with these images by editing them on Photoshop so that I can decide which will look the best on my front cover.

Experiment 1:

The Process:

Experiment 2:

The Process: 

Experiment 3:

The Process:

Photoshop Editing Techniques

Before I started the editing process I looked at a couple of Photoshop editing tutorials using YouTube to widen my knowledge on Photoshop.

This is the first tutorial I viewed which explains how to change lip colour using Photoshop. The tutorial gives a step by step guide allowing me to clearly see how the look is created. This is useful to me because I am considering altering my models lip colour to have a darker appearance allowing me to achieve the Indie Rock look that I am aiming to create on my front cover.

This is the second tutorial video I looked at which explains how to change the colour of a background in a photo using Photoshop. The tutorial, like the last, gives a step by step guide of how the technique is done which may help me when I come to editing my final photo for my front cover if I decide to change the background colour in any way. 

First Photo Shoot

These are the photos that I took during my first photo shoot using a Nikon camera. From taking test shots in preparation for the shoot I already had an idea of what lighting, background, positioning and angles/framing looked best on my model so when taking these photo's I had a clear idea of what I wanted my final photo to look like and so it was just finding the most effective photo for my front cover. I used 2 lights at either side of my model to try to cancel shadowing on her face and the background, this also helped to make all her features clear and visible giving the photo's a professional look. I used a plain background on my photo's because this will make any editing a lot easier and is also a convention that I have noticed on many magazines. It also again makes them look quite professional. I experimented with a few positions to make sure the Indie Rock genre was reflected through the image however I always made sure she was stood away from the wall to stop her from looking flat. I also experimented with a few camera angles and framing but generally used a straight angle and used a medium close-up shot due to these being conventions which work most effectively on a front cover. I didn't get my model to wear one of my planned outfits because they were created before I came up with the tag line that I was going to use. The tagline I have decided on is 'Lucy Bell hits the road' and so I thought that I would use the outfit that I have because the jumper has footprints printed on it and so this creates a connection between the image and the tag line which I thought was quite effective. I still managed to reflect the Indie Rock genre through the costume as her outfit is quite dark colour orientated which is generally what Indie Rock artists wear. My model also has a natural, messy/wavy hair and quite natural make-up which again reflects the Indie Rock style. This look is a possible final style for my front cover however I may take some more photo's which maybe include a leather jacket and some red lipstick to portray the Indie Rock look even more, giving me a wide range of options to choose from. Overall I believe these photo's are quite effective and will give my magazine front cover the professional look I am aiming to achieve.

Box Mock-up of Front Cover First Draft

This is my final box mock-up of my magazine front cover. The box mock-up shows where all of the features will be placed on my magazine when I come to creating it and it also represents the general layout of the front cover.

Final Front Cover Ideas

These are my final ideas for the things that I will feature on my magazine front cover. I have now decided on the: main story/headline; features; plug and artists that will feature on my front cover. Now I have completed this I can now start to create my first front cover draft.

Front Cover Ideas

After conducting the planning and research that I have, I now have some ideas of the type of things that I may feature on my front cover. I have created a mind map which shows the possible main story/headline, feature stories, plug and included artists.

Test Shot Images